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Posted 8/19/08 , edited 8/20/08
Yay! I'm the first one! ^^
U can feedback if u want ^^ and i won't leave the meaning 'cause i think it's kinda obvious xD

what a silly thing you did
asking me whether i liked you or not
even if i did,
i wouldn't have the guts to tell you so

but you keep asking me how i feel
and i can't tell you what's so wrong
'cause everything you do
makes me fall for you even more

if you could get inside my mind and see
what i wanted us to be
maybe then u'd find out
what's going on with me now

I'd like to show you a honest smile,
talk to you as i did,
tell you everything's alright
but i don't think i'll even can

All i wanted was to be happy,
was that too much to ask?
the only thing that comforts me right now
is the mere idea of you laughing
and still making me smile

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Posted 8/22/08 , edited 8/23/08

wow... that is awsm!!!

comment if u like...
my poem is very short ~~~


~ a single word
~ can change so much
~ so I keep that word
~ in my heart
~ and let fate decide
~ whether it was true

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