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[Fanfiction] Love Is Painful
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Chapter 11



Amu’s POV

“Why are you here, Yumiko?”

“They’re holding me hostage.”


“It’s a long story.”

“I have time.” I joked. Before Yumiko could speak, our cellar door opened. My eyes widened.

“How have you been Amu dear since I last met you?” she said sweetly.

“Why are you doing this, Fukushima-san?!”

“Why? You ask me why?! Why do I think I did this??”

“It is because of…Keiichiro?” I whispered quietly.

“That’s right! My son, my successful son. My husband and I had high hopes for him. All of our hopes shattered that night. What do you think of that?! And now you have a boyfriend! How can you feel unashamed?!” I gasped.

“How did you know that I have a boyfriend?!”

“I have my ways.” She smiled wickedly.

“It couldn’t have been Sachio, could it?!” Sachio wouldn’t do that! Betraying his friends…

“Who knows? Maybe Sachio-kun did, maybe he didn’t.”

“Answer me!” I shouted.

“Humph, I don’t see why I have to.” She snickered. “Now, I believe your boyfriend is Tsukiyomi Ikuto, is he not?”

My eyes widened. Keiichiro’s mom can’t hurt him!! Ikuto’s not supposed to be in this mess! I should take the blame! But I didn’t know that she still held a grudge against me. Sachio said that she didn’t. Wait, was she holding Yumiko hostage so Sachio could get information on me?!

“You wouldn’t,” I whispered. She smirked.

“I can if I want to. You come out now,” she called out. A girl suddenly came in our room.

“Miyuki?!” Keiichiro’s sister. She was two years younger than me. I have only seen her once and she looked a lot like me but her hair and eyes were different. She was about the same height as I am. Our voices are so similar and Keiichiro always laughed at how alike we are. She was like another sister to me. But now, she looks different though…she has pink hair and yellow eyes.

“What are you planning?!” I shouted to Keiichiro’s mom. She was smirking.

“Don’t you see? Who does she look like? She has pink hair, golden eyes, and the same height as you. Who do you think she looks like?” she asked sarcastically.

“Is she impersonating…me?” I whispered.

“Humph. Now you figured it out. You are quite slow.” My bangs were covering my eyes. I looked at Miyuki and she doesn’t seem happy. Was she forced to do this?

“Why are you making her impersonate me?! She doesn’t even want to!”

“You’ll find out soon enough,” she said ignoring me other comment.

“Let go of me!” We heard someone shout from above. Ikuto?!

X-x-Sachio’s house-x-X

Su’s POV

Rima-san knocked on the door. The door opened to find a woman with a surprised look.

“Yes?” she asked.

“Is Sachio there?” asked Kukai. “We’re his friends.”

“Please come in first!” she said as she gestured us inside. I saw Sachio with a surprised look on his face.

“Su…” he whispered. I stared at him.

“I’ll leave you guys alone.” She walked away.

“Sachio, why?!” I asked him. He flinched back from my words.

“Moreover, is Amu here?” Utau-chan asked.

“I have my reasons and no she is not here.” he said.

“Then where is Hinamori-san?!” Tadase-kun yelled. Sachio’s mom came in the room then.

“Are you guys thirsty? Here are some drinks. And could I please speak to my son for a second?”

“Ma’am,” I asked.


“Stop doing that.”

“Doing what?”

“You are helping Sachio deny our questions. Answer me, Sachio! Where is Amu-chan and why are you doing this?!” They both flinched back from my words.

“It’s none of your business,” he muttered.

“It is so my business!” Wow, I haven’t been this harsh in a long time. “Amu-chan is my friend! Of course it is my business!! And…and I love you! So whatever involves you, involves me!” Utau-chan, Tadase-kun, and everyone else was shocked. Sachio’s mom was expressionless. Sachio was…sad?

“I’m sorry,” Sachio whispered.

“If you tell us, maybe we could help you.”

“How can you help us?!” Sachio’s mom shouted jumping into the conversation.

“I think we can. Tell us, please.”

“…Fine.” Sachio’s mom said giving in.

“But, mother!” Sachio said.

“It’s alright.” She looked at me. “Do you promise to help us?”

“Of course we’ll help you.” I smiled.

Ikuto’s POV

“So this is where Fukushima-san is staying at.” Ran said.

“Let’s go.” I commanded to them. We got out of the car and went to the front door.

“Um, I don’t think we can get in the front door nya.” Yoru said sweatdropping. Miki laughed quietly.

“You’re right. Let’s go in through a window.” Miki suggested.

“Hey! What are you doing here?!”

“Too late,” Ran said smiling a wicked smile.

“You girls run. Yoru, Daichi, and I can take these 10 guys down.” I said getting ready to fight them. I was the strongest out of Yoru and Daichi. Yoru and Daichi knew a little fighting skills but I’m worried at the girls. I turned towards them and was surprised at their expressions. The girls were smiling evilly.

“Don’t underestimate us. Ready, Miki?”

“I’m ready as you are.” Miki said.

“Let’s go!” Ran shouted. As we guys were getting into a fighting position. We saw something blur past us. In two seconds, we saw two guys on the ground with Miki using one leg to step on one guy’s stomach. Ran was on top of the other guy’s back pulling the guy’s right arm up. Both of the men were unconscious. All of us including the guards were gaping.

After a few surprising seconds, the guards began to move. Us boys began to move as well. Miki took another guy down and the same goes for Miki.

One guard charged at trying to land a punch on my chest but I smoothly dodged it by moving the top part of my body to the left. I then swung my right leg fast while the guy still had his fist out and my leg hit his legs causing him to fall. He stood back at trying to punch me again but my fist punched him square in the stomach first. He grunted and fell down unconscious. Another guy aimed for me but I knocked him unconscious as well.

I turned around and there were two guys left. It looks like Ran, Miki, and I took down two and Yoru and Daichi took down one each. The remaining two guards were scared and shivering. They began to run away from us and towards the house.

“Not so fast!” Miki shouted. Ran and Miki ran after those two. Miki grabbed one guy’s left shoulder and whirled him around. The guy tried to punch Miki but Miki dodged it and grabbed the arm with the fist and threw him over her shoulder resulting with Miki on top of him with her leg on top of his stomach. The guy was knocked out completely.

Ran was running and got in front of the last remaining guard. The guard stopped in his tracks and brought his fist up to punch Ran in the stomach. Ran dodged it smoothly. The guard was getting frustrated so he swung his leg towards Ran’s leg hoping to knock her down. It worked. Daichi ran towards Ran as the guard was planning to kick her.


Ran lifted herself up making her in a handstand and as she went back to standing position, her right leg as it was coming down hit the guard’s neck and swung the guy to the ground. Ran landed gracefully on the ground.

“You ok, Ran?” Miki asked.

“Never better. I haven’t had fight like this for a while.” Ran grinned. They turned towards us.

“Will you guys stop gaping at us?” Miki asked.

“You guys aren’t hurt are you?” Ran asked.

All of us didn’t say anything. Our jaws were all the way down.

“What. The. Hell. Was. That.” I said clenching my teeth together.

Ran laughed loudly and Miki joined her.

“I didn’t know you could fight, Miki nya! You didn’t seem like the type to fight.” Miki shrugged.

“You’re amazing, Ran!” Daichi ran up to Ran and hugged her. Ran blushed.

“How do you guys know how to fight?!” I asked them.

“Well, Miki, Su, Amu-chan, and I took fighting lessons. Miki and I know the most. So, Miki and I are equal and Su knows the least because she doesn’t like to fight but she likes to have some fighting skills for defense. Amu-chan knows more than Su but she is not at our level. Amu-chan stopped fighting 8 months ago or so. We stopped training a few months ago before we met you guys.”

“Wait, Amu knows how to fight?!” I asked incredulously.

“Yea, that’s why Amu-chan got her stolen stuff back from the burglars that tried to take her things. She has been attacked plenty of times because she is like accident prone.” she joked.

“Wait, she’s been attacked a lot of times.” Ran nodded.

“Oh yea. That’s why Miki and I are worried if Amu goes alone in the night but she can fight them off so she tells us not to worry so much. But she always gets hurt and she’s been attacked by burglars like 6 times already or so including the times before we met you people.”

“Why didn’t she tell me?!” I shouted.

“Ikuto, be reasonable. Why do you think that Amu-chan didn’t tell you?” Miki asked me. “She doesn’t want you to worry and be a nuisance. We tell her that she isn’t one but she doesn’t listen. Amu-chan is caring and considerate so you’re lucky to have Amu-chan as a girlfriend.” She smiled.

“Just don’t get on our bad side,” Ran said smiling at us.

“Sure thing.” Yoru was sweatdropping.

“Let’s go save, Hinamori then!” Daichi yelled.

Ran turned the doorknob but it was locked.

“Back up guys,” Ran whispered under her breath.

We backed up and Ran charged at the door kicking it but it wouldn’t budge.

“Ran,” Miki said looking at Ran.

“Ok. On the count of three. One, two, three!” Both of them raced to the door and kicked it at the same time. The door flew open.

“Alright! It opened!” Ran yelled and high fived with Miki.”

We ran into the house and I must admit, it was beautiful. Everything was spotless. There were glass tables, an expensive tea set on the table, couches that looked comfy by just looking at it, a chandelier, and much more expensive looking things.

“As expected of Fukushima-san,” Miki muttered.

“Huh?” Was this lady rich as me?

“She’s rich and her house is amazing! But I think you’re more richer than her, Ikuto.” Miki stated. I smirked.

We heard footsteps from behind. I whirled my head around. More guards.

“This is a pain in the ass,” I mumbled. Daichi laughed loudly.

“Let’s finish this quickly.” Ran said as she dashed to one of the 6 guards. She knocked him out completely in three seconds. I pair of hands were holding my arms from behind.

“Let go of me!” I shouted at the top of my lungs. The guard was off in an instant and I found Miki next to an unconscious guard that was one me before.


“No problem.” She ran to take another guard down. I saw that more guards came.

“Holy crap, this is going to be endless!!” I shouted.

“Ikuto, go find Amu nya! We’ll take care of these bodyguards!”

“Thanks!” I started running towards the door to another room. Two guards came out from that door and I positioned myself to fight.

“Ikuto, keep on going!” I heard Ran shout. I got of my position and started running as fast as I could. Ran was faster than me and took down those two.

“Thanks, Ran!”

“Go, already!” she shouted. “Hey, Ikuto!” I spun around.

“This may be childish or corny and you can call it whatever you want to, but keep that with you.” She threw a silver whistle at me and I caught it.

“Just blow on it when you’re in trouble and we’ll come to you.”

“Thanks!” I turned back around and started to run at top speed. ‘Amu, wait for me! I’m coming!’

Amu’s POV

“Hmm…it seems they aren’t so bad. I paid tough guards to guard this house in case your friends or intruders come in but your friends fought them off.” Fukushima-san wasn’t smiling. I smirked. Wow, I was actually smirking.

“Don’t underestimate my friends.” I said.

“Humph,” She was smiling wickedly. “I have cameras all over the place and I have a computer right here with me.” (A/N: I’m making this up. She has those computers that shows the all the cameras’ views in the house.)

“It seems that your dear Tsukiyomi-san is the only one rescuing you. What a pity that only he escaped while your other friends stayed and fought my guards. By the way, my guards have guns.” She flashed a wicked smile at me. Fear swept through me.

“RUN AWAY YOU GUYS!!” I screamed at the top of my lungs. My throat started to hurt.

“Shut up!” Fukushima-san power walked up to me and slapped me across the face. I tasted blood on my lips. I really am a danger magnet aren’t I?

“Amu-chan!” Miyuki and Yumiko shouted at the same time. At least they cared…did Fukushima-san force them to do this? She is going way too far with this. Where is the real Fukushima-san that has always been so kind and caring to me?

“Hmm? It seems that Tsukiyomi-san is close.” I bet she was looking at the computer. My head was starting to spin a little.

“Miyuki? Let’s go.” Miyuki didn’t move; she looked confident but scared at the same time.

“No,” she whispered.

“What did you just say?”

“No,” she said louder. “No!”

“How dare you disobey me! I am your mother! Who raised you? Who took care of you all these years? Who gave birth to you?!”

“You did, mom but this is going too far. Amu-chan is not at cause here.”

“Oh, so you’re saying that you don’t care that your brother died because of this murderer right here?!” Miyuki flinched back from those words.

“Amu-chan isn’t at fault here. The accident wasn’t her fault! I’m sure Keiichiro-onii-chan doesn’t want this. You’re going too low! Where is the real mother that I know?!”

“Listen to me or your dear Amu-chan is going to get whipped!” Fear swept through me.My head turned towards Miyuki. She was scared too. I saw a guard coming towards Fukushima-san. Miyuki's eyes widened. Yumiko was struggling in her chains. He gave the whip to Fukushima-san and she walked up to me. My eyes stared at the whip the whole time.

“Well, Miyuki, if you won’t listen to me, I’ll just have to make you listen to me.” Miyuki was hesitating. I shook my head fervently when Fukushima-san’s back was facing me.

“Well, if you still say no…” She turned back towards me and I closed my eyes shut waiting for it. It was more painful than I thought. I let out a blood curdling shriek. I saw that Fukushima-san was smiling a wide evil smile.

“Amu-chan!” Yumiko and Miyuki yelled.

“Well, Miyuki? Do you still intend to disobey me?” she asked turning her back towards me again. I shook my head again mouthing the words, ‘Don’t, it’s your own free will. I’ll be alright.’

“I say that you need to watch another attack.”

“Don’t!” Miyuki yelled. Fukushima-san stopped.

“Does that mean you’ll listen to me?”

“I don’t want to listen to your evil ways.” Miyuki said her voice quivering.

“Don’t listen to her! I’ll be alright. Fukushima-san doesn’t own you.”

“Shut up, you…bitch!” She whipped me again. I let out another shriek. I looked down and saw a line of blood on my white sweatshirt.

“Stop hitting her!!” Miyuki yelled at the top of my lungs.

“Don’t Miyuki!! I’ll be fine!”

“Fine. I’ll just keep on whipping her.” Miyuki’s mother whipped me again. And again. And again. I screamed loudly every time she hit me. She whipped me until I had two huge scratches on each of my legs and three on each of my arms. I guess you could say that she hit me 10 times. My sweatshirt was turning red on my arms and I began to lose consciousness. (A/N: Remember, Amu is wearing a tankini and a sweatshirt when she was kidnapped. And she is also standing up with ropes tying her feet together and her hands are above her head. So she can’t move.) I heard Miyuki and Yumiko screaming to stop. They don’t have to, I’m fine. Miyuki and Yumiko should be free. I’m the one that got them into this mess.

“Stop!! Fine, I’ll listen to you! Just don’t whip Amu-chan anymore!!” Miyuki yelled at the top of her lungs.

“Alright, then. Miyuki, follow me.” Fukushima-san walked out of our cellar with the guards following her. Miyuki turned to look at me. Miyuki ran up to me quickly and caressed my cheek.

“I am so sorry. I should’ve said I would obey her earlier.” she whispered. I gave her a small smile.

“Don’t worry about it. It was your own choice. You should be free from all of this. Same for Yumiko.” I turned my head towards Yumiko and she was crying. I gave her a smile and turned back to Miyuki. “Miyuki, could you do something for me?”


“Your mother is planning something for Ikuto. You’re impersonating me but I want you to listen to her. If she tells you to say like ‘I love you’ to Ikuto or anything that I would say, say it.”


“Trust me, Ikuto knows me really well. Now get going!” Miyuki looked at me one more time and I saw that she was crying. She ran out of the cellar.

“Amu-chan!” I turned towards Yumiko.

“What’s up?”

“Don’t ‘what’s up’ me! Are you alright! You’re bleeding so much!”

“I’m fin—” I stopped.

“Amu-chan?” I felt dizzy. I began to black out. I heard Yumiko calling out to me and I could hear nothing and see darkness surrounding me.

Ikuto’s POV

I heard a scream. That was Amu’s voice! I’m sure of it!

“Amu! Where are you?!” I ran until I reached a room with no doors leading to another one. I was about to turn back when I heard something creak in the room. One board was opening on the floor. A trap door! A middle-aged woman came out smiling at me.

“Why, hello. You must be Tsukiyomi Ikuto-san. I heard about you.” How did she know about me?!

“Who are you?! And where is Amu??”

“I am Keiichiro’s mom. Your Amu killed my only son a year ago.” She began pacing back and forth across the floor.

“That wasn’t Amu’s fault! It was just thugs who broke into the restaurant and killed him! Now, answer me, where is Amu?”

“You can see her of course. Come up, Amu.” I saw two guards coming up with a pink haired girl in the middle.

“Amu!” I shouted. I turned back to the lady. “What do you want from me?”

“Nothing much really. I just you to be killed.” I couldn’t speak.


“You heard what I said. It’s either this or Amu dies.” One guard swung out his sword and put it under Amu’s neck. Amu gasped.

“Stop! Answer me first, lady. Why do you want to kill me?!”

“Well, Amu doesn’t seem to care that she is dating another boy after Keiichiro died. I wanted her to see that she should feel ashamed. I decided it would be ok to ruin her love life and how it would feel for the man she loves die in front of eyes.”

“First of all, what you told were all lies. Amu didn’t answer me when I confessed to her. She was scared about betraying Keiichiro. And I’ll be willing to die for Amu. So, yes you can kill me but if I do die, will you free her?”

“But of course!” She smiled wickedly. Something tells me that that is a lie.

“Alright, then. Kill me now if you want to.”

“Idiot! Don’t just die! Don’t, Ikuto-koi!” My body stopped moving. I quickly regained my composure.

“Ma’am,” My voice was a tiny whisper.

“Yes, Tsukiyomi-san?”

“May I say something to Amu?”

“Of course, say your last words to her.” I walked up to Amu.


“What is it, Ikuto-koi?” Her voice was shivering and her voice sounded different.

“Where was the first place I showed you?”


there it is ^^ i wanted to cancel out the part where Amu talks to Miyuki about listening to her mom before she blacks out. and i forgot to add in that Ikuto heard Amu say, "Run away you guys!"

hope u like it ^^
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i'm trying to update this story today but my other computer with microsoft word is being used so yea.....

but if you guys want, here is a spoiler! ^^

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i just read this on fanfiction.
love this story so far
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omg sooo good thanks for uploading!!!!!!
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keep on going XD
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thiz iz one of my favoirte fanfictionz!!
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this is great! continue!
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oh,and will u read my fanfic? its only 4 chapters long right now, but its on the forum called kokoro no tamago
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Ah!!! Is this really Natsuya?!!! This is Natsume Yuiki~~!! Hi hi!!~!!!!!!! I se you review my fanfics often~~THANX SO MUCH X]]]]] !!! Your's is really good too!!!
Sorry with the over use of exclamations.... =.="
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O_O woah.
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