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[Fanfiction] It Never Works Out Between Us
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HeavenMyth wrote:

Gambate in ur exams ^^
Hope u get good grades =D
When ur exams are over be sure to update ya??
Gonna miss ur stories >.<

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HeavenMyth wrote:

Yeah , I have my exams in 1 week and 3 days .. =( , Good luck on your exams =D .
When your exams are done be sure to update y'hear ? >:) , I wanna
read the rest of the story .. Like everyone does
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I love your fanfiction! :D
My exams are next week, so I understand how you feel... ^^ Good luck!
Hope you update soon!
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HeavenMyth wrote:

It's OK.
I will wait.
But if you have a writing exam, you sure will ace!
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hope u do well on ur exam.
-cheerin'- Go, HeavenMyth! Go, u can do it ( i sound like Ran)
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Oh! I read this already on FF! I reviewed too!
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Prinny3000 : Hahahahah! Thanks for the Daichi-do-your-best picture!
mo0rawr2 : Ohohoh! You can be my Ran supporter. Only if you were a chara size and not many people can see you, I would have made you help me memorize the notes. I’ll be cheating with your help! XD
Willowstorm : I thought it was quite boring…. =.=
Katie245 : Here you go! Shoo! Go read the chapter now! =)
ll-Shota-ll : Uhm. Thanks for the advice. I’m still a beginner in writing so I’ll take advantage on your advices. I’ll slow down the progress a little. =) Once again, thank you.
Starllight : Maybe she is? Maybe she isn’t? Find out for yourself. But you’re sharp. =D And, my current stress are the exams!! =( I can’t seem to concentrate on studying because my mind is all on the fic! AHHH!
Nalami : Thank you. I’ll make it more awesome than before!
chibidynz : Haha. I’ll make you hate Himeko in this chapter.
mariah10 : Is this soon enough? :D
princessyurble : Short but meaningful. Okay. I’ll write more from now on!
buzzini : Better chapters to come!
amu77 : I’ll make you obsessed with it!
xxluck : Oh really? Are you very sure that Amu learnt Ikuto’s name?! Hehe. Writing exam? Yeah. We have one. Just that I’m not sure whether I’ll ace or not. Because, the stupid examiner is so damn freaking strict! ARGH! Just to tell you, half of my classmates fail the exam. T_T
AmuNanoha : I hope I get good grades! I’m so bad in history! I have to memorize this, memorize that. ARGH! And, I have free time today so I updated. =)
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Chapter Four : Engaged?! Suzune Himeko and Tsukiyomi Ikuto!?!?

Ikuto woke up with a start from the cause of shuffling noises. He opened his eyes only to be welcomed by bright lights. He realized that it wasn’t his room. Then he remembered about last night. He smiled a little.

Ding dong.

The doorbell, was all Ikuto thought. He sat up and realized that his wounds did not hurt anymore. The door of Amu’s room opened. She looked at him surprised. “You’re up? That’s good. You’re little girlfriend is here” said Amu with an expressionless face. Behind Amu was a beautiful girl with long black hair and honey-brown eyes just like Amu’s. “Ikuto-kun! You shouldn’t be in other girls’ house when you have a girlfriend already!” Himeko whined.

“Himeko!? Why..? How…?” Ikuto could not make up any words to describe his current shock.

“Your little friend here called me saying that my boyfriend is in her house” Himeko pointed at Amu, cutely.

“Himeko…. – sama. Drop the act. It’s disgustingly disgusting. Your usual self suits your image better…” Amu said coldly. It felt as if she had to force the word “--sama” out of mouth. Himeko looked at her innocently. “Heh…? I should always leave my boyfriend a good impression!” A vein popped out of Amu’s head. “Take him and Get. Out. Of. My. House. RIGHT NOW!” Himeko giggled and motioned Ikuto to go with her.

“Ah. Hinamori. Maintenance at 8 in the morning tomorrow. Meeting after your maintenance at the office. Don’t skip” Himeko said.

”Maintenance?” was all Ikuto thought.

“It’s not even 3 weeks and maintenance already?” Amu complained.

“It’s an order from Easter” Himeko demanded.

Amu slammed the door right on Himeko’s face. “Are you okay? Are you sure you’re going to the --” Dia’s sentence was cut off. “I’m not going. It’s too much of a hassle to go” Amu smirked. Dia giggled.

Tomorrow, Sunday ; 7.00am

“Amu-chan! Amu-chan! Wakeeeee uupppppp!” Dia screamed trying to get Amu to wake up. Amu flung her hand trying to shoo Dia away. “Amu-chan! You have maintenance and a meeting today!” Dia whispered evilly. Amu shot up from her bed. “Eh?!?!?!” She rushed to the bathroom and took a quick shower. She wore a printed black shirt that said “Gothic Punk” in white. She wore a white ruffled skirt and a pair of black and white sports shoes.

She took a bag, big enough to store her cellphone and Dia’s egg. She took a diamond-shaped clip and clipped up one part of her fringe. She set off to Easter.


“Himeko-sama! Today is the maintenance day for Hinamori Amu. What would you like to erase?” A very carefree guy asked Himeko.

“I would like you to erase Hinamori’s memories that has anything to do with Ikuto and the fact that she ever smiled. I want her to say the cold heartless Amu that I created for her” Himeko smirked.

The Easter slave bowed and wrote down what Himeko needed.

Knock Knock.

“Come in..” Himeko shouted to the door.

The pink haired girl opened the door with a cold face. “Yes. That’s the face I want to see” Himeko thought. “Can we start? I don’t want to spent my off day in Easter” Amu said with no expression. She opened another which lead to a white room with a chair. She sat down on the chair and Dia smiled at her. Amu took a deep breath and closed her eyes. She felt straps tying her onto the chair and her eyes covered. Then she blacked out.

Easter Maintenance Room ; 8:55 am

The gothic shirt girl got off the chair and went straight to the Easter main office. Himeko walked behind her and had an evil smirk all the way to the office. Ikuto and his step dad was there. Amu’s expression did not twitch nor show any expressions once she saw Ikuto. “ A-hem. Now everyone is here.” Ikuto’s stepdad said.

“So? What did you call us here for?” Amu asked coldly.

Ikuto and Himeko twitched at the voice of her cold tone.

“Firstly, Ikuto. From today onwards, you are officially engaged to Suzune Himeko”

“Eh?! Wait. But -- ” Ikuto was cut off by Amu.

“Mm. Next. I don’t want to listen to some parent and son quarrel here” Amu muttered.

“Okay. The next one is…. Hinamori and Ikuto. You are dismissed”

Ikuto and Amu walked out of the room quietly. As they headed out of the room, Ikuto took the chance to glance at Amu only to find her staring straight back at him. “What?” Ikuto said to defend himself. “Nothing. I’ve never seen you around Easter before”. Then it struck Ikuto.


They must’ve erased her memories at the so-called maintenance.

Seiyo High Guardian’s Greenhouse

A creepy silence filled the greenhouse. Only Yaya’s chewing could be heard.

Chew Chew Chew .


Crunch crunch crunch


Munch munch munch

“ARGH! WHAT THE HELL IS WITH YOU PEOPLE?! HOW CAN YOU BE SO GLOOMY WHEN I’M BACK!?” This is 100% Nagihiko. “Ah… he chara nari-ed with Temari….?” Kuukai and Rima said with their eyes round.

“Uhm. How should we start?” Tadase started.

“Amu-chi! Amu-chi! *chew* We’re here *chew* to discuss *chew* about her!*chew*” Yaya said while munching on her chocolate.

Nagihiko glared at her with a I’m-going-to-kill-you-if-you-continue-to-eat-the-chocolates-i-bought-for-everyone look. Yaya shivered and put down the chocolate. Kuukai laughed. Then, a blonde hair girl with beautiful features and glimmering amethyst eyes came in. Tsukiyomi Utau. All eyes shot to Kuukai. They started to laugh seeing a tomato-red Kuukai.

“Ah. I have something to do in the garden” Tadase looked at them.

“Me too” Rima said.

“Ah! Me three!” Yaya continued.

“Uhm. I seem to be interrupting something here. So, see you later Souma-kun” Nagihiko waved at Kuukai.

Out of nowhere, the charas popped out. “One second he was violent. The other he’s so elegant” said the charas with a “=.=” look.

Utau looked at Kuukai and blushed. Kuukai returned her glance with a huge smile.

“Hehe! They’re probably being lovey-dovey now!” Yaya exclaimed.

“I agree. Since Utau lost her brother-complex, she seemed to have developed a crush on Souma-kun” Tadase said.

“Ano… we’re here to talk about Amu. Not Souma-kun and Utau-chan” Nagihiko said.

“Ah. Right. About that day.. she didn’t seem to remember us…” Tadase started.

“And she was so mean to Yaya too!” Yaya shrieked.

“I think it had something to do with Easter” Nagihiko predicted.

“Easter?!” Yaya shrieked louder than before.

“Should we go?” Tadase asked.

“Where?” Yaya asked.

“Easter” Nagihiko smiled.

“EH?!?!?! FOR WHAT?!” Yaya screamed.

“Shhh. We’re going to sneak in. We need to find out about Hinamori-san” Tadase said.

“I agree. Let’s ask Utau and Souma-kun” Nagihiko suggested.

“Of course!”

As they went closer the greenhouse, they halted to a stop. How do they interrupt a lovey-dovey session politely? They peeped. They could see a pinkish Kuukai and a pinkish Utau talking. Sighing in relief, they went in and told them their plans. Utau strongly disagreed.

“I object to this. Going into Easter is too much for us!”

“But we need to find out the cause of her loss of memories!” Tadase begged.

“Fine. Just once. There’ll be no second time. Sneaking into Easter can cause us our death!” Utau shouted.

“Hinamori!” Himeko shouted from the hallway to a pink-haired girl who is drinking coffee alone.

“What?” Amu looked up with a bored and expressionless look.

“Your next mission” Himeko smirked.

“Heh? It looks like something interesting” Amu replied.

“It is. We have intruders in Easter” Himeko looked out to the windows.

“Hmmm…? And? I have to stop them?” Amu asked.

“Not only you. Ikuto-kun will help you” Himeko glared at Amu.

“Hmm….? Shouldn’t you be the one doing it? Since he is your fiancé?” Amu shot at Himeko.

“Well. Since I’m in the Guardians, I can’t let them know that I’m involved with Easter” Himeko replied.
Amu stood up and put down her coffee. She walked towards the exit along with Dia. Suddenly, Amu felt a hand on her shoulder. She looked up and saw the nekomimi guy. She chuckled, “Your hobby is cosplaying?!”

Suzune Himeko’s POV(I totally forgotten about POVs. So I’m writing one)

“Your hobby is cosplaying?!” I heard Hinamori said to my beloved Ikuto. WHAT IS HER PROBLEM!? Ikuto’s so good looking with or without those cat ears. Yoru is such a perfect match to my chara! Wait. Did Hinamori laugh?! I turned towards Hinamori. She definitely was laughing! I remembered I asked that stupid maintenance slave of mine to wash off the memories when she ever laughed!

ARGH! He’s so going to get it from me. I stomped off towards the maintenance room.

“Hey! TSUKUMO!” I screamed.

“Geh! Himeko-sama! I’m very very very very sorry!”

Idiot! “Sorry?! She’s even flirting with my beloved Ikuto!”

“But… Himeko-sama. “It” seems to be awakening soon! That’s why I couldn’t erase some of the memories!”

“It” was going to awaken? I could only think about her awakening, her graceful features that outstand mine, her face with pure innocence and… her stealing away my Ikuto. Wait. Pure innocence? Hah! She lost that long time ago.

“Give her the drug..” I commanded.

“Um.. which one?” Stupid Tsukumo. He doesn’t even know?

“MORON! Of course the newly made one!”

I stomp off to watch the battlefield between the guardians and the disgusting Hinamori and my beloved Ikuto. I can’t believe this! How can he group my charming Ikuto with that disgusting Hinamori?!

“Black Lynx!”



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Amu’s POVI’m quite bad in POVs. Heh. Forgive me!

I headed to the exit and stopped. A hand stopped me. It was that guy. The… nekomimi guy. Pfft. “Your hobby is cosplaying?” I chuckled. He looked a bit pissed though. I brushed him off and turned to a room nearby the exit.

My office.

“Where are you going?” The stupid nekomimi guy said.
I didn’t bother to answer and I walked straight into my office. I took a golden bangle with a turquoise jewel on it. I wore it and sighed. Once again I have to fight. I looked at my table and saw a plastic bag. Realizing what it was. I took it up to my hands. I poured out what was in the bag.


I took two of them and was about to place them in my mouth but was stopped by a warm hand. Stupid nekomimi guy. “Let go” I demanded. “I will if you tell me what kind of pills it is”. Sigh. Annoying brat. “My health. Okay?” The nekomimi guy let go. I put the pills in my mouth and swallowed it. “Let’s go”. The boy followed behind.

As we reached closer, we heard footsteps. Three people. No. Four…No… Six people. “Ready?” I looked at the guy beside me.

“My heart, unlock!” The guy chanted. Heh? He has the Dumpty Key? Interesting.

“Black Lynx” Ewww. He looks so gay!

“Amu! Above you!” I saw a few clubs above me. “Release, Satellite Soprano!” My bangle glowed. It’s been a while since I fought with Dia and Soprano. Soprano was a staff. A golden staff which held Dia’s powers. I pointed it to the clubs and they broke instantly.

“Nagihiko, you go head first. You can’t do chara nari yet! We’ll back you up!” A blondie guy said to someone named Nagihiko.

The violet haired girl nodded and she ran towards another direction. That direction! Don’t tell me…! I WON’T LET HER!

“Oi! Nekomimi guy! You take care of here. I’ll go after that girl named Nagihiko!” I shouted and ran ahead.
I ran and ran. She couldn’t be heading to that room! ANYTHING BUT THAT ROOM! “Wait!” I screamed and pounced on her. It was…. A guy?! “Amu” the guy said. Something flashed in my mind. “I’m Nagihiko and Nadeshiko. I’m sorry to have kept this from you”. I dropped Soprano and clutched onto my head. ARGH! GO AWAY! DISSAPEAR! I DON’T WANT TO REMEMBER!

It hurts. It hurts! It hurts!!! The pills! I reached to my pocket and took out a few. I swallowed them all at once. The pain eased. As I realized, the guy named Nagihiko was already far from my sight. I ran and ran. He will not enter that room. I will stop him! I will not let him see her!

Nagihiko’s POV

I can’t believe this. No way. What is… this?! I looked down from above. A room which looked a lot like a hospital place to me. Someone was inside. I look closely… No way! I DON’T BELIEVE THIS! There was X Eggs all over the place! And…

“STOP!” Amu shouted.

“Amu!!”I shouted.

She was clutching onto her head and was holding a golden staff. She panted and coughed. Something dripped from her mouth. It was blood. Not red blood. It was… black!

“Nade…sh…i..ko…” She muttered.

“Amu!” I ran towards her. She whispered, “I remember. You told me you are Nagihiko and Nadeshiko”. “Amu! You remember me?!” I said very loudly. She looked up at me. Her glare was cold. She hit me. And within seconds, I blacked out.

I could only feel someone carrying me.
Sigh. Exams Exams. I HATE THEM! I hope you enjoy this chapter! I put a lot of thinking into it. But I think the progress went a bit too fast. Oh well.
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thank u for uploading the chapter
can't wait for the next one^^
Good luck with the Exams
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Good luck with your exams ^^
I can't wait for the next chapter (:
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mo0rawr2 : Ohohoh! You can be my Ran supporter. Only if you were a chara size and not many people can see you, I would have made you help me memorize the notes. I’ll be cheating with your help! XD
I wonder if was Ran u will made me memorize alot note, ( i won't memeroize so i'll just rite all the infor down on a paper so i'll just look at the paper. and u will cheat with my hlep) Good luck on ur exam ( take out pom-pom and start cheering) Study, Study, S.T.U.D.Y Study, Study ! Go, HeavenMyth! Study 4 ur exam ( OMG i sound like Ran )
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gah! I hate Suzune Himeko. *fire bursts into my eyes as I stare down her name on my moniter*
Sorry. Random hateage of evil people.
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wow, the plot is progressing quite nicely! thanks for posting a really interesting and nicely written fic!
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more please, thanks!
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M / OMG are you stalk...
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Sugoi this is awesome, man I hate Suzune Himeko Grrr but when I found out that they removed Amu's memories I was shocked like this ------> lol
Anyways good luck with yr exams get 100%! lol again!
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