NOVEMBER Poetry Contest
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Posted 10/31/08 , edited 11/1/08
This is an official monthly contest. Just use your imagination and creativity and get a chance to win, so try to join and do your best! The rules are simple, just look below.

Poetry Contest Rules:
1. All CR rules apply to this contest
2. Length should not be too short nor too long.
3. The theme is sorrow/sadness.
4. It should be creative.
5. Do not copy somebody else's work.
6. You can send more than one entry.
7. Deadline would be November 30, 2008.
8. Winners will be chosen by daddyluvboo and the mods. Winner will be announced on the first week of December.
9. The poem that wins will be posted in the group profile for the entire month of December.

Judging/ Rubrics:
originality 35%
creativity 50%
choice of words 5%
flow of the poem 10%

BONUS: Anyone who was able to put and fit the word ice cream in the poem will get an additional one point but those who can put the flavor of the month which is Mint will get additional 5 points in the scoring.

For any other questions, please post in this forum.
Posted 11/8/08 , edited 11/9/08
sorrow that i have
i wish that sorrow and sadness in my heart is gone
but i can think of anything to make it gone
i try to find a flavored mint ice-cream but i can't find it
sorrow that i have is getting bigger

i try to play some tricks but i get my feet broken
i try to watch some videos but they look gross
i try to make some one laugh but they throw me tomatoes
sorrow and sadness that i have is more bigger

i wish i could taste an mint flavored ice-cream to cheer my day
Ice Cream Lover
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Posted 11/8/08 , edited 11/15/08
One Taste Reminds Me Of You

This minty taste reminded me of you....
You're fresh, yet sweet taste...
I was sad when you left...
Cried every step you took....
I was depressed and alone...
I savor very moment that we had...
Like I savor every mint bite I take...
Of every scooped mint ice cream....
One taste reminds my of you...
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Posted 11/9/08 , edited 11/11/08
On hot or cold days,
Ice cream will always eventually melt,
In every kinds of ways.

How sad i felt,
When my mint ice cream was changed to soup,
My eyes were full of tears,
I wish i could have one more scoop,
But the contanier was finshed and thats one of my greatest fears.

Not only the ice cream went to waste,
But the cone did too,
I didnt even get to have one taste,
I was to busy to eat it when it was nice and new.

So i lay on my bed,
Until the day ends.

its not that good but at least i tried

Posted 11/18/08 , edited 11/18/08
everyone please join....^^
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Posted 11/21/08 , edited 11/23/08
Mint flavoured Ice-Cream

One sunny day in the middle of May
In the ice-cream shop i wanted to stay
When i got there i saw this thing
The ice-ream bell started to ring

It was a Mint flavoured ice-cream all sweet and nice
I tasted it,it was better than rice
I finish it all,all clean and neat
This Mint flavoured ice-cream is better than meat

I left the ice-cream shop and went outside
I run,jump,flip and hide
I've never feel this feeling before
I feel like i wanted to eat some more!!

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Posted 11/27/08 , edited 11/28/08
I Wonder If It's All About Mint Flavoured Ice-cream

I wonder what are the most beautiful things in the world.
I wonder about the sky, the universe, little boys, and little girls.
I wonder why my mind drifts about your sorrow, thoughts a taste out of place.
I wonder about an ice cream feels, an ice cream's curves, an ice cream's face.
I wonder what makes an ice cream taste good, I want to eat, waiting to exhale, or giggle.

I wonder about Mint ice cream, with hot choco sprinkles.
I wonder what my hobbies are, what will I do in my spare time.
I wonder what beads of sweetness would look like an mint of coldness.
I wonder what it would be like to just be a Mint ice cream that burst of happiness
I wonder what will relieve my sorrow of loneliness
I wonder about Mint ice cream, with hot choco sprinkles.

I wonder how it would feel to have a friend, in a tub full of Mint ice cream.
I wonder if this is just my artistically written or a poetic inspiration of what I truly see.
I wonder if attrctive looks, natural sweetness, mintiness is the key to make a Mint ice cream.
I wonder, I wonder the daylong minute after minute, hour after hour, I waited to eat to taste an...
Mint ice cream, with hot choco sprinkles.
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Posted 12/1/08 , edited 12/1/08
Congrats to our winner, chocolate-luv! We would like to thank all the participants for joining, don’t worry if you didn’t win since this a monthly contest. Try again for the month of December.
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