Dual Soul
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26 / F / Greatest Place on...
Posted 9/25/09 , edited 9/26/09
~>Dual Soul<~

By: asian_heart

© asian_heart 2009. All rights reserved. Distribution of any kind is prohibited without the written consent of asian_heart



The corridor was long and dreary. There was a cold chill in the air that could shake you to your bones and freeze your outer skin. My chest moved up and down with a unknown emotion ,that swirled around my head like a whirlwind.

My best friend, Junsu, sat behind that door of that unknown world. I peered through the small glass window, as if I was staring into a parallel world of white. Junsu looked like a angel in white as he sat lonely in his white hell. I couldn't stand to see the my best friend locked in a white box made of cotton.

He notice me through the window and flash me a smile that could brighten anyone's mood. I flashed a nervous smile back at him. My smile was corrupted, tainted, smeared with blood. His smile was innocence of a child unlike mines. I felt fear in the smile, that it will change like it did that terrible day.

In fact, he's my patient as well as my best friend. I keep him here locked away from the world to hold his inner child.

I turned the knob slowly and took a deep breath. I was turning the knob of a door that rested in Cherryhill Asylum.

It was hard for me to face the fact that my best friend wasn't in his right mind....


This is a fanfix that I'm currently writing over at soompi and gained a few fans. I saw crunchy has this sectioning now and I decided I post here too. I currently posted 7 chapters, working on chapter 8.
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26 / F / Greatest Place on...
Posted 9/25/09 , edited 9/26/09


"Junsu,ah" I called with a fake smile plastered on my face.

He smiled innocently back at me with his pure eyes. He was my one and only patient for three years. I felt a lump in my throat. Could it be guilt for locking him away here. No, this was for his own protection. The outside world would crush him like a worthless fly. No one would accept him. His brain was permently a brain of a seven year old child. He was forever like this, as long as I known him.

"Yoochunie, I've missed you."He peered into my eyes. "You've been gone for 26 days."
"Junsu, I'm touched you even counted." The truth it scared me to my being. To see how attached he was to me. Just like when we were little, he was holding on my sleeve.
"You missed me right,"He tugged my sleeve for response. "Isn't that why you came?"
"No, Junsu I came because there are new developments about your mother."

His body went rigged like a jagged rock and stared blankly at me. His smile always disappeared when his mother was mentioned.

"What do you mean?" he asked coldly.
"Well..."I got nervous when he gets into a serious tone."Your mother case has been re-opened."

His eyes went dark, as if he wasn't living. He was dead and lifeless like his mother when we found her. Junsu was standing over her body emotionless with blood splattered all over as if it was a masterpiece.

"I didn't do it..Yoochun"he murmured.
"I know, Junsu."

He turned his head and stared into my eyes seeking the truth but it wasn't there.

"I promise Junsu we'll find the killer."

Junsu smile turned into a sneer and face me.

"No, you will never find him." he paused. "He is to never be found."


"Detective!" Someone called from down the hall.

He stormed into my office with a panic look. It's was Youngwoong Jaejoong, my pathner.

"The case has been re-opened." he stated.

I felt my eyes get bigger than a owl from shock. He didn't even have to mention the name of the case because the scenes is still en-graved into my mind. A corpse sawed in half, blooded smeared on the walls, and the wails of the son. His cries still ring in my ears time to time, it was a deafen sound.

"jaejoong, were any new developments found?"
"Yes,"he said as he opened up the dusty file that had been closed for 3 years.

"It says..."he gave a cough to clear his throat.
"8:00 pm, at Salim Forensics. A small jewel was found in the stomach of the corpse."

I cocked a eyebrow. It's unusual for a case to be re-opened but also, Forensics to search for more evidence on a closed case. Someone must be pulling string behind the curtain.

"This is odd."I gasped. Jaejoong nodded his head and closed the file. A shadow clouded his expression.
"What is it?"
"The boss want us to interrogate the son."he said with a grimace.

Kim Junsu was Kim Eunhae son. The one who discovered the body first or possibly the one that committed the murder. I believe he is insane enough to do it.

"Lets go, jaejoong." I tossed on my coat and headed towards the door.
"Now?" He said flustered. "We're really going to that crazy house?!"
"Yes, Junsu may be guilty or innocent but either way he knows something we don't know."

I remember it clearly. It was a rainy night just like tonight when me and Kim Junsu just meet.

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Posted 10/31/09 , edited 10/31/09
youre so good.... a DBSK fic...!
please continue writing...
pls. pls.pls.
ill wait patieltly for the next chappies...
Posted 11/6/09 , edited 11/6/09
Good murder mystery.
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