Post Reply One Wish
Posted 10/24/09 , edited 10/25/09
She had One Wish.

And One Wish in particular.

All her friends knew about it. And they were certain it would never come true. But she still


She wished for him to love her back. She spoken the words to him even, "Those Three Magical Words," but he never returned them and just began to laugh. He was not nice. Actually, he was the rudest person she'd ever known.

He only cared about himself, he was selfish.

And she loved him dearly for it. Dangerously, even. She tried to find a loop-hole in his rude exterior, but he wasn't fictional, he was real. Real and Unbelievably heartless.

“Why love such a cold and ruthless person, Celia?” My friends would always always ask me.

I would just close my eyes and say, “His heart is just broken now. I want to be the one to mend it.”

They would just snort, and think poorly of me and pity me as a "fool." They never really called me that, but I'm sure that's what they were thinking.

"You deserve way better than the way he treats you," They said.

Yeah... but I don't care what they would say.

If it really wasn't meant to be, if it really was a dead hope, then why do I dream of him everyday when I sleep? And every night when I sleep?

And every second of my life? And every minute of my life? Every hour, every month. Each year. And he still looked at me the same. It hurt me so much on the inside, but I kept those unwanted emotions sealed deep inside a chained up door inside of me.

But I wasn't stupid, I tried to forget him once. I really did. I think a Week was the best I could do. And then, I would always forget to forget him. So I stopped trying.

My friends were still not satisfied with the end result, "Try harder." They persisted.


If I try again, it'll hurt when my heart remembers how much I still love him, and how much he doesn't love me. And how it was utterly, set in stone; I could never forget nor stop loving him.

My friends were shamed because of that, And soon we became like strangers. Whenever I would see them before we were still friends, the only words that came out of my mouth were of Him.

They'll just always hear me say, “In my dreams, I see us holding hands, kissing, having our very own Love Song, the white wedding dress, the perfect friends watching the Happily Ever After that is to come. Him protecting me from dangers, kissing me each morning...”

I was like a Broken Record Player, really. Always repeating.

But... I wanted my dreams to become reality! For him to love me back! I didn't want to cry myself to sleep every time I would see him! And I hated writing in my Diary about him every day, the tears fall on the pages every time, every page I would mention an insignificant thing he would do. The way he talked- the way he walked, the way he just... LIVED!

But one day. He bumped into me in the hallway in School, my books dropped to the floor.

“Watch it, will ya!?” He shouted and stormed off without even helping to pick up my books. I don't even think he saw that tear in my eye as he shouted at me.

No, he never saw the hurt. He never saw the struggle, the shooting stars in my eyes; when I made my wish those many year ago.

I was only 9. And here I am- 17. And here he is, still the same. For 8 long years... I had to deal with the constant reminder. The constant beatings in my heart whenever he looked at me.

These Days, I felt like a lifeless Zombie roaming around in the halls, with a heart that would only truly become alive if he would say those 3 words.

If Only...

“She's so sad to look at lately... oh my god.” One of my "friends" whispered behind my back, the other said, “I know...! He's like, killing her on the inside.”

And I couldn't take it anymore. The unwanted emotions sealed deep inside the chained up door, finally opened.

“YOU GUYS HAVE NO IDEA HOW IT FEELS LIKE!” I threw my books down on the floor making a loud thud, shoving them both of my way. “YOU TWO SHOULDN'T EVEN BE CONSIDERED AS MY 'FRIENDS!'”

Both the girls were speechless as they were shoved out of the way. And out of her life.

What just happened.... ?

They just un-leased the Ugly Beast within.

She was going to confront Him.

With the door opened, it would never be sealed again. It took years to seal it up, now what she was about to do was inevitable.

When she saw him walking into his classroom- she followed in. And grabbed him by the arm, “GET OUT HERE! WE NEED TO TALK!” I forced him out of his seat, and dragged him out of the Classroom. The Teacher and students watched with shock as they left in a blur.

Celia didn't care of the commotion or disturbance she'd caused! Damn it! She wanted to know why he didn't love her back!

And when Celia took him somewhere where they could be all alone without witnesses, Celia shouted and asked, “WHY DON'T YOU LOVE ME!?” -This way, if she got shot down again, nobody else would know- She grabbed him by the collar of his shirt. He scowled and slapped her hand off.

“Get your hands off of me, you phyco!” He snapped and backed away from me.


He stopped backing away now, and stepped forward. “WHAT DID YOU JUST CALL ME!?” He grew a vain in this heated argument, but I wasn't going to chicken out!

“Tell me why you don't love me back!” I put my fists up to my chest, and he held my shoulders at first, then slamming me against a locker.

That again!? What part of, I Just Don't, can't you understand!?” That answer was NOT good enough... I wouldn't take that answer anymore from him!

“REASON! GIVE ME A REASON, DAMN IT!” I begged, It was just One Wish... it wasn't even a big deal... if he would just say it, I would be completed. Just say it! Just say it!

“Please! After the many years I tried to make you love me back... you just pretend I don't exist. I'm NOT invisible! I'm human and I have feelings! F-for you...”

Unlike him.

He shook his head, and laughed.

He wasn't afraid to speak the truth to me, “That's a cute speech. But I don't love you back. Never will, do you understand the meaning of NEVER?” But then his laugh turned into one of those dirty looks he would always give me. I hated that... and no matter how much I tell him, his feelings for me were not existing. Not in this planet anyway.

“Is that how you really feel. . .” I felt my heart drop to the ground, it was damaged, a few broken cracks here and there. And I began bawling my eyes out.

“But if nothing I say should matter to you, there's one thing I should let you know,” her voice cracked into a million pieces, I would feel this way forever, The Girl With A Broken Heart, Still Finds A Reason To Live.

“You are my One Wish.”


The day after, her wish had came true.

That's why they call them miracles, they're so sudden and unexpected.

ThE. EnD.
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21 / Desert Bluffs
Posted 10/25/09 , edited 10/25/09
nice XD
love it <3
Posted 10/25/09 , edited 10/25/09
lol thank youuuuu owo
"The day after, her wish had never came true."
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27 / F / In my own little...
Posted 10/25/09 , edited 10/25/09
Awww, cute ending =w=
So mean D:
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24 / F / nowhereland,USA
Posted 10/25/09 , edited 10/25/09
I really like this. it got a little confussing though, going back and forth between first and 3rd person....

still, rox^^
Posted 10/25/09 , edited 10/25/09
@embiee: i know right!? Xd

@Casie; yea we all got things we gotta work on huhh xD
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27 / F / In my own little...
Posted 10/25/09 , edited 10/25/09
=w= Yeah I've noticed that little thing a lot too XD
You really SHOULD work on that though, so you can be an author when you grow up ;D
And kill people with laziness DX
Posted 10/25/09 , edited 10/25/09
lol idk i THOUGHT about it, but then was like, "What about my...powers of laziness? What if i get uninteresting in a story and ppl sue?"
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27 / F / In my own little...
Posted 10/25/09 , edited 10/25/09
they can't sue for uninterestingness XD
If they did you should sue them for slander >:D
Posted 7/23/10 , edited 7/23/10
im reaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaalllllllllllyyyyyyyyyyy curious as HOW it came true......i know im not supposed to but.....TT3TT
Posted 7/24/10 , edited 7/24/10

weeelll, usually wishes come true 'suddenly & unexpectedly' xD
*fail reason*

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