making a manga little help here?
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Posted 2/1/10 , edited 2/1/10

To all good-willed people who wants to help..

I'm very confused on what people told me about my manga..(still on process but here is its front page..)
It's story is about Chihiro who is a ghost sweeper(right term?) and on a very great career but her assistant just died out of a freaky ghost she's hiring a new one.(and as other shoujo mangas are, there is a boy..predictable..)She found Shinichiro on a vacanted,creepy place and some of his memories are deleted(yah..that's right).Then she made him as his assistant(houseboy pretty much)..and after many ghost encounters and memories Chihiro just discovered that he has GREAT potential...potential much more powerful than hers..

Well that's quite a summary..Please tell me if it isn't quite a good story plot..T.Y.
(this forum was transferred from anime to fan fic..ty)
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Posted 2/1/10 , edited 2/1/10
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