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Posted 1/11/11 , edited 1/12/11
This forum is where you can post your poems and where others can give you feedback. People who didn't write the poem, don't steal it! So start posting now!
Posted 1/11/11 , edited 1/12/11
Okay, so I'll start. This was for my English homework, so I'm just posting this up since it wouldn't be fair if I didn't participate too. And keep in mind that it was kind of rushed, so it might not be the best poem ever.

Yellow and Brown

Some days, I am a bright yellow
And full of light,
Like a light bulb in an unlit room.
Other days, I am a murky brown
Sustaining a gloomy aura
With shadows surrounding me,
Making others look my way.
But at this moment, I am a wavering gray
Unsure of the decisions I have made.

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Posted 1/17/11 , edited 1/18/11
This was pure boredom, written by my friend Tyler and I.

Roses are red.
Violets are blue.
Won't you keep away from my girlfriend,
or I'll kick your ass too?

If you don't,
that's completely fine
That's 'cause tomorrow,
we won't hear you whine.

But if we happen to hear,
and there is nobody near,
we'll hurt you like there's no tomorrow.
Posted 1/17/11 , edited 1/18/11

xD This is a great poem, I loved it!
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Posted 1/17/11 , edited 1/18/11

Hyper-Intake wrote:

When I read this, it totally made me think of the different emotions. I could just feel the brightness inside a person, and the darkness. It really resembles someone in a time of need. I love it. <3

Posted 1/17/11 , edited 1/18/11

It's pretty good, I like it! And I was going to make a song forum, but I keep forgetting to. Thanks for participating and I hope you continue to be active in this group!
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Posted 1/18/11 , edited 1/18/11
a skyscraper dully falling slow. An escalator straight into my skull.
oh,no the shows slowly, lonely turning blue.
is she seeing sue? or coinciding with "Who"? .
tick,tick,tick gos the teen·sy-ween·sy brokenclock.
weary of the new; "boo" is "who" - "who" is "dog" is "god".
will she scream,silently flee?subside with silly sally?.....

I Do Say ,she has turned to "silent silly".

" ............................"

PSYCHO 8DD lmfao; this is in the view of two people,errr, two...O-O however you see it.
it's sad; in the end she dies.a simple poetry of what "Human isolation" can do.
choking,choking on her own "sinners be winners". uh huh; i 'm also here.

Posted 1/20/11 , edited 1/21/11

Love this poem, you guys always write the best poems!
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Posted 1/20/11 , edited 1/21/11
Yet again, the boredom strikes.
By Tyler and Yoshirou.

Hit punch stab,
so many choices.

Hurt shank jab,
what will I choose?

Maybe it'll be one,
Or maybe it'll be two.

But just to let you know,
There's gonna be one thing we'll do.

It won't kill you,
you surely won't die,

But you'll be suffering
because of the loss of your eye.

Or maybe it'll be your arm,
where it'll be gone.

And your leg,
we'll say, "So long."

Then next comes your chest,
the very best.

It'll be chipped,
or maybe even ripped.

After your chest,
is your Head.

After this,
you'll won't be able to sleep in bed.

Everything will be black,
Darker than ever,

But don't say we didn't warn you,
because we never said, "Never."
Posted 1/22/11 , edited 1/22/11
Hm not very good with writing poems. Here is an example of what i mean:


Woe To Those
Who Fall In Love
With One Such As I

The Tainted Swan
Amongst Foreign Allies
Who Has Lost It's Sight Of Way

And With Glistening White
Feathers Gone
Has Lost It's Purity

And Who, Oh Who
Has Broke A Many
Of Those Allies Hearts

That Were So Frail
And So Easily Made
To What The Swan Needs

Only To Find Themselves
Thrown Away, Unneeded
As The Swan Moves On

So Woe To Those
Who Dare To Fall
In Love With One
Such As I
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Posted 1/29/11 , edited 1/29/11

i think its very good!!
but a sad poem)":
Posted 1/29/11 , edited 1/29/11

i am glad that you like it
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Posted 2/2/11 , edited 2/2/11

that is sad! but good anyway
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Posted 2/2/11 , edited 2/2/11
Lovely Little Lies ( Ramble/poem Thingy though up on the spot) :

Its The
Lovely Little Lies
That you tell
just seem to
fill my heart
with a sense of

And its the
lovely little lies
that seem to
be the only way
you'll ever say that
you love me

oh oh oh oh

These Lovely Little lies
just seem to fly right
out of that
gaping mouth of yours

And its these
Lovely Little Lies
that keep me
coming back
for more

doo doo doo

Lovely Little lies
keep me grounded
to your heart

oh oh oh oh

with out em
we'd still be apart


oh your lovely little lies
make me want
to up and fly

oh oh oh oooOOOooo

( wow it sucks for not being edited )

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Posted 2/2/11 , edited 2/2/11
(break up poem, its not the best but oh well throught i post it anyways!)


Foget his name, forget his face
Forget his kiss and warm embrace
Forget the time you spent together
Forget it all he is gone forever

Forget the fact that he once cared
Forget the love that he once shared
Forget his love that once was true
Remember now there is someone new.

Forget you cried all night long
Forget him when they play your song
Forget how close you once were
Remember how he chose her.

Forget you memorized the way he walked
Forget the way that he talked
Forget the time he made you mad
Remember how he made you feel so sad.

Forget the thrills when he said hi!
Forget the times he made you cry
Forget the way he said your name
Remember now he is not the same.

Forget you saw him yesterday
Forget his gentle and teasing way
Forget the things you had planned to do
Remember now he is not with you.

Forget the times that went so fast
Forget it all it is in the past.
Forget he said, “I’ll leave you never”
Remember now he is gone forever

Forget the past that you once knew
Forget it all, leave it too
Cause he no longer loves me
...........he loves you............
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