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♛ 2014 MIDYEAR BEST GUY CONTEST♛

Posted 9/12/14 , edited 9/12/14
yea it is........quiet Bathroom probably wont be too happy with the spam I sent him
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This is My Vote

Forward with Fire

Alibaba and Killua are staring at the blank white walls of the square room in which they stand when an army of black spots appear on the walls. The spots grow along and out of the walls into shapeless figures as tall as Alibaba. Killua takes a step forward and feels something prick the back of his head. One of the figures moves in front of him and compresses itself into the shape of a needle the length of the hair on the back of Killua’s neck. A trace of white-blue ice appears in the center of the needle; the ice spreads in both directions along and beyond the ends of the needle. The two ends of this new needle bend to face Killua, and then suddenly stretch into spears to pierce his arms. The spears split off from one another as they dig further into Killua’s arms and travel up his bloodstream throughout his body. He automatically reaches to the back of his head, grabs his hair, and tugs, but he pulls out only a clump of hair. As the black figures approach him, Killua turns around and prepares to run, but stops in the face of a black circle that occupies his entire field of vision. He reaches into his shorts pockets and pulls out his twin metallic yo-yos, but the ice spears inside of him strike his fingers from within, stiffening them and making Killua drop the yo-yos. Several ripples form in the black circle. The ripples move around randomly at first, but soon settle into the shapes of forward-bent fingers with knuckles bulging out. Killua turns away from the newly-formed fist only to find another, identical one before him. The fist opens up to reveal a blood-red mouth on its palm. The ice spears suddenly poke out from within his legs; the ice spreads from the spears up his legs and over his stomach. But before the ice spreads any further, a fiery slice cuts the hand in half and runs over both halves, incinerating them; a speck of fire lands on the tip of one of the ice spears and instantly melts it, stopping the spread of ice. Killua looks over to see Alibaba, who looks different than before. His hair is now as orange as the fire that cut through the hand, and he now wields a large sword just a shade lighter than the black figures. As Alibaba raises his sword above his head, a golden glow emerges from it and shines beams of golden light all around the room, cutting through any figures they encounter. One of the beams shines at the edge of the ice on one of Killua’s legs and proceeds to travel along it, erasing it and leaving a glow in its wake. Upon erasing all of the ice, the glow sinks into Killua’s body, where it turns into a gentle flame; the flame spreads throughout his body, melting the ice spears upon finding them, until it reaches the back of his head. Killua feels a warmth in place of the prick. He flexes his fingers and toes, then dashes forward, leaving a trail of after-images behind him as he reaches the figures with lightning in his palms. He jumps up and throws the lightning down to strike the ground; the lightning shoots up in the form of several bolts and travels in a circle around the room, electrifying and subsequently disintegrating every figure it touches. The remaining figures crowd together inside of the circle. At this, a wall of flames appears before Killua’s eyes; he blinks, and the wall disappears. Killua suddenly smirks and jumps backward behind Alibaba just as a small inferno erupts around the young prince’s sword in the shape of a man wielding a sword of his own. Even over the roar of the flames, Killua hears Alibaba’s words:

“Amol Albador Saika!”

Alibaba and the fiery man swing their swords down in unison, sending tendrils of crimson fire criss-crossing along the floor, through the black figures—consuming them as they go, and up the walls, scorching them until not a trace of white is left on them. Alibaba takes a deep breath and returns to his original form as he sheathes his sword. He turns around and smiles his brightest smile at Killua. Killua returns the smile just as they both vanish from the scorched room.

Alibaba wins by inspiring Killua to overcome a moment of self-doubt and fight on.

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Posted 9/12/14 , edited 9/12/14
This is my jtav001 vote

Alibaba... would win in a bro-down since Hakuryu would come to the scene and behead someone in front of a bunch of orphans. In the insuing dark-Rukh chaos, Alibaba, not Killua, would be the one to bring back the bright Rukh and stave off Al Thamen.
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Posted 9/12/14 , edited 9/12/14
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Killua would win a Bro - down by breaking Alibaba's neck, all assassin style.
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Posted 9/12/14 , edited 9/12/14
Time's Up!
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Made catching up to the thread easy.
What a easy path tho
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Posted 9/12/14 , edited 9/12/14
It's kind of a shame Alibaba lost by double-digits, but I suppose it doesn't really matter in the end. It's better than losing a close match at the last second.
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Posted 9/12/14 , edited 9/12/14
The results are in and Killua Zoldyck came out on top. He will be moving on to the next round. I had to throw out one vote for Killua because they didn't follow the rules.

Killua Zoldyck - 14 Votes


Alibaba Saluja - 5 Votes
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Posted 9/12/14 , edited 9/12/14

hayate_sensei_853 wrote:



I like what you have so far.

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Posted 9/12/14 , edited 9/12/14

jtav001 wrote:


Wow I was rocking a super awesome ice spear
That was really fun to read.




Thanks for reading! Glad you liked it


Hayate_Sensei will probably be mentioned next, so be ready broseph
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Posted 9/12/14 , edited 9/12/14

h9902014 wrote:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M2XXbgIu4PU

Have you either of u seen this yet?

What is this awesomeness????
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Posted 9/12/14 , edited 9/12/14

hayate_sensei_853 wrote:

It's kind of a shame Alibaba lost by double-digits, but I suppose it doesn't really matter in the end. It's better than losing a close match at the last second.

But wow, where did all his supporters go?
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Posted 9/12/14 , edited 9/12/14

That was a good part. I liked when

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Posted 9/12/14 , edited 9/12/14

bathroom64 wrote:

THIS IS MY VOTE

Ulric's Revenge

Chapter 4:

Luminescent blond hair...
All the little details are the funniest things in these stories.


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Posted 9/12/14 , edited 9/12/14

jtav001 wrote:


h9902014 wrote:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M2XXbgIu4PU

Have you either of u seen this yet?

What is this awesomeness????


It's the 2 part OVA Attack on Titan: No Regrets - Birth of Lev. I can't wait for it.
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