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WINNERS ANNOUNCED ~ CONTESTS ADDED!! ~ CR Movie Night ~ Time of Eve : The Movie

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Are you having fun?
With the sound of the elated,
Joyous times await you
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Backed both this and patema inverted.when they were on Kickstarter
Both really amazing movies.

Nyan Nyan I'm a cat
Chie-chan please give that back
I'm a cat Nyan Nyan
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Hmm.... Ended up writing two, both in non-standard 6-7-6 syllable format. Not sure if either sits quite right, and can't decide which to go with. Oh well. I'll just put both up. (One or the other can serve as my "single" entry.)

-Haiku 1: Cafe Cup-
Reflections in a cup
Cream and coffee blend as one
What novel tastes they make


-Haiku 2: Clockwork Time-
Two hands of different shape
Meet to find a single heart
Sweet chimes the hour of Eve


P.S. Apologies if this is a double post. I submitted these poems last night, but the post doesn't seem to have shown up.
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Welcome Time of Eve
Sadness smiles in our cafe
Am I not human?
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Whether you're alive,
isn't if your halo shines.
It's liking coffee.
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35 / M
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nameless android friend
we toast and remember you
drinking our evelend
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In the time of eve
Treat everyone equally
Humans and androids
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ok i have already entered my submission but wanted to share this one just for fun

logic defines life
life defies logic
coffee's good though
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Hopefully this is where you post the contest stuff.... Well, here goes nothing ;P
Wires made of metal
Beating human hearts
They gracefully meet at the Time of EVE
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Life self pondering
Quickening precepts five be
Wabi Sabi WE
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M / Texas
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Hearts and Souls Connects Us Together
Friendships that are Made Can Last Forever
Friendships Can Survive any Weather
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Android with feelings
Like finding a utopia
I wish they are real
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Feel the Eveblend scent,
As i hear the piano sound plays
Sammy smile, I'm happy as well!
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"Atmosphere"

Evlend’s aroma
wafting from the ceramic --
Nagi’s earring gleams.

While questions of humanity/identity stand at the forefront, finding significant meanings in the inanimate (i.e. the piano and the café itself) are crucial. The standardized approach to haiku writing is really quite fitting for such a theme.
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Haiku:

Humans play piano
To convey their emotions
That's why androids play




Androids create art
A Universal Language
That bridges our gap

Writing that blurb/explanation gave me inspiration for creating that second Haiku.
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