Post Reply My Story (fanfic) One Last Kiss
Posted 2/6/08 , edited 2/23/08
No chem reference highlighted, this is not accepted for the contest, i personally am not a fan of naruto, but i would've given it a fair chance if you'd have had that chem reference highlighted ~Duster
This is my fanfic, on Sasuke and Sakura, I posted this on a site called as well, my account name is xPandaGirlx. So i want to say that before i get put on for plagerizem. I changed a few things around again and added a bit of the second chapter ^^, but i will try my best to make it great and finish it on time ^^

Disclaimer:The studio or author owns Naruto not myself!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

When The Snow Begins To Fall

Sakura walked down the white snowy path, the snow was light and fell slowly on the uneven path. It was night she had been walking for hours, after she had stepped off the train she had to walk from there since no cars were available. The moon shone brightly on her as she walked slowly as she could in the deep snow. She was tired ver tired to top that she was cold; the snow was up to her knees covering her small brown boots and dirty blue jeans. She was naturally pretty; emerald green eyes that were always filled with life, porcelain skin and her very rare pink bubblegum hair that fell to her hips. She was always made fun of when she was a child about her forehead, so naturally her bangs covered them and went past her eyes. She was heading to an old town with nothing but a small bag over her shoulder containing her belongings, she had no idea if she were to live or not since she didn't know if she were to freeze here or not, but she knew she had to make it to the town as soon as she could.

She hadn’t been in the town since she was 8, after her parents died, she fled and now she was finally coming back. She had heard about the town while living in the city, it held very wealthy people and it had the best school in the country. She walked slowly on the path but the snow began to pick up. She saw an old house in the distance, there was a small candle lit in the upstairs window. She knew she had to reach there right now, she couldn’t die not now, so much as it pained her to continue the pain in her legs shot up and she was ready to give up but she was stronger then that.

She finally reached the house and grabbed the old handle roughly and opened the door, it was clean, the floors were an expensive wood that she couldn’t guess the name of, the curtains were silk of a royal blue. The room also contained dark leather couches and a fire place made from imported marble, it was really exquisite, compared to the outside.

Her eyes began to close as she was starting to loose balance. Her knees began to wobble from the cold and she began to fall, she was caught in strong male arms, she looked up to see her savior but all she could see were deep onyx eyes and raven black hair and she was out like a light.

The sunlight shone through the expensive floral curtains, Sakura opened her watery emerald eyes. She stood up on her bed and looked around the room; it was unfamiliar. The bed was huge and had many blankets and quilts. There was a window and a wooden desk with a new computer unused and untouched. The door was not far from it and another she guessed was the washroom.

She thought for a moment, she used to live here, and the house she saw in the distance outside looked vaguely familiar. When she lived in this town with her parents, she but one friend, she remembered his name, Sasuke. She would always play with him, and he also had a beautiful mother and an older brother. But she didn’t remember him having a father. She thought for a moment.

“Then that boy who caught me was….” But before she could finish her sentence she heard footsteps at the door. The door knob turned and a beautiful woman entered the room.

She had long raven hair and familiar onyx eyes, her eye lashes were long and she had light make-up on that made her look natural. She wore winter jacket under a simple blue dress, she carried the most happy and respectful smile she had ever seen; she resembled a god to Sakura.

“Welcome, Sakura-chan” The woman said walking closer to Sakura. She thought for a moment remembering her past.

“Mikoto-san!” Sakura yelled as she ran up and gave Mikoto a hug.

The young woman laughed

“I’m happy to see you remember me; I can’t believe you finally came back, I haven’t seen you since you parents died!” Mikoto said hugging Sakura back.

Sakura began to remember, this used to be the town she lived in a very long time ago, she remembered the day well, the day she fled from the town and the same day her parents died.


“I’m home, Tou-san, Kaa-san” Sakura yelled as she walked into her house. She heard a fain yell coming from the living room.

An 8 year old Sakura ran down the old wooden stairs. Her feet padded on the old pine floor. She heard another yell.

“Kaa-san!! “ Sakura shrieked as she stopped at the living room door as her mother fell to the ground with a thud.

“Katsura” A low voice whispered as a man fell to his knees of his dead wife.

“Tou-san?” Sakura asked as she slowly placed her foot before her to begin a slow walk to her father.

“Sakura! Go run now get away from here!” He yelled to her but the words slipped from her mind as he was slashed in the back, he tumbled down unto the hard wooden floor, dark liquid began creating a puddle around the two.

Her eyes went wide as she stared at her two parents, her world began to spin as she yelled her lungs out and fell to the floor, tears rolling down her face as she breathed heavily in and out, but soon she was out like a candle.

End Of Flashback

“Yes well, I thought it was the right time, I was planning on living in my old home, but I’m a bit scared to go there” Sakura said quietly.

“Oh no worries Sakura-chan you may live here, but you came so late I’m leaving today to America, but Sasuke-chan lives here as well” Mikoto said with a sheepish grin on her face

“Sasuke-kun?” Sakura said as she blushed.

Mikoto smiles smiled but soon there was a loud thud from the downstairs door.

“Oh, that must be Sasuke-kun, he hasn’t seen you for years, he surely will be happy to see you again Sakura-chan ne?” Mikoto said turning her back to Sakura and walking out of the room, Sakura blushed even redder as she slowly followed Mikoto down the stairs.

They were at the front door where a boy with a dark cape around his neck and the hood on his head. He was on his knees, removing his shoes and putting on slippers, as he stood up Sakura could see his face clearly now.

He slipped the hood off his head and Sakura blushed. He had onyx eyes and raven hair; he was wearing a blue shirt that showed of his well matured body. He had on white long pants, his face was cold and emotionless, and he was gorgeous.

“That’s the boy from earlier, Kyaa its Sasuke!!!” Sakura though in her head.

“I haven’t seen him for years!He really looks different” Sakura said to herself

“But he sure is hot” Inner Sakura stared drooling

“Urusai” Sakura said to her.

“Sasuke-kun, do you remember Sakura-chan? You guys used to be friends” Mikoto said happily.

Sasuke looked at his mother but then averted his onyx eyes to Sakura.

“Now there’s a girl” Sasuke’s inner self thought.

“Urusai” Sasuke said to his inner self.

“Long time no see, ne Sasuke-kun” Sakura said quietly to him, he nodded.

There was an awkward silence.

“Sakura-chan, you may stay here as long as you like but I will be leaving now, since I only came to visit Sasuke-kun, so please take care of him for me, he is as cold to people as ever, but I believe you may break him from it.” Mikoto said to Sakura, though she whispered the last part.

“I promise” Sakura said since she was being so kind to Sakura, and she remembers her, since her mother was best friends with Mikoto it was the least she could do.

And with that Mikoto was gone.

Sakura sighed.

“How will this turn out! But I promise Mikoto I will make this go well!!” Sakura said proudly.

As she was about to go to the Kitchen, she heard screams outside the house, people were outside hitting the door, with posters. Scared Sakura walked up to the window, there were about 100 girls outside screaming holding posters that read: Marry me Sasuke or I love you. Sakura looked at the window in shock.

“Sakura” she heard a male voice behind her.

She turned around and Sasuke was standing there holding a cup of tea.

There was a pause.

“Are you sure you want to live here with me alone?” Sasuke said smirking

Sakura turned back to the screaming girls and one of them noticed Sakura.

“Hey what is that girl doing in there!!” They all began to yell and hit the doors and window harder. Sakura stepped back from the door and turned back to Sasuke.

“I can take a challenge” She said smirking back and taking the cup and tea from his hands and walking back upstairs.

Sasuke looked at her.

“She hasn’t changed since all this time, this is going to be interesting” Sasuke said walking back to the kitchen to get another cup of tea.

Chapter 2

It has been now one week since Sakura has stayed at the Uchiha residence and for Sakura it as been very different.

She brushed through her long pink bubblegum hair as she looked at her reflection in the mirror. She smoothed out her new school uniform and smiled. It consisted of a skirt that was a bit above her knees; it was blue with a ribbon on the side, a white blouse and a blazer. It made her look mature and pretty as she was; it fit her body well and showed of her petite body.

“My first day of a brand new school” She said to herself as she hum her favorite song.

She walked down the stairs and slipped on her coat, Sasuke walked down soon after looking as breathtaking as ever. He had the boy’s uniform which consisted of navy blue pants, a white shirt that hung loose on his body with the schools symbol on the side and a blazer.

As she tried not to drool she stared at him with wide eyes.

“I am not in love with him, I must not fan girl him, and I am not in love with Uchiha Sasuke!” She yelled to herself

She was giving the weirdest facial expressions as she argued with herself. Sasuke noticed this and looked at her.

“Um, can we go now?” He said a bit annoyed at her,

She was knocked out of her daydream and looked at him and blushed.

“Ah, I’m sorry yea, let’s go!” She said as she opened the door and raced out of the room.

As he smirked he closed the door behind him and walked out into the cold morning. Sakura was walking down the path and Sasuke looked at her strangely.

“Sakura, where are you going?” Sasuke yelled to her.

She stopped and turned to Sauske. She looked at him in disbelief, where else could she be going, she checked where it was she knew the way.

“School where else?” She answered him proudly

On cue a fancy car stopped in front of the house. She looked at Sasuke and to the car and sighed,

“Oh that’s great showing up in a fancy car, I’m not going to cause attention” She said to herself.

She dragged herself to the car and went inside. In about 10 minutes they finally reached the school and it was HUGE. Sakura thought they were at the wrong place. This was the best school in the country and it was private and only rich kids went there. She paid for it herself since she had money leftover from her parents, since she wouldn’t let Sasuke pay for her.

She stepped out of the car, and all eyes were on her, and really every single boy and girl stopped and stared as Sakura stepped out of the same car as Sasuke. Sasuke not noticing continued to walk. Sakura was a bit scared,

“Wah, Sasuke wait for me” She said as she ran to Sasuke, a girl with long blonde hair and sky blue eyes walked by and tripped Sakura. She fell to the floor with a thud into the melting snow.

Sasuke turned around and saw her, he felt a bit of pity for the girl since it was her fault she was being treated this way. He walked up to her and gave her his hand.

“Hurry get up now, you’re making a scene” He said as he looked away from her.

Her eyes went wide as she quickly took his hand, blush on her cheeks. The both of them walked quickly to the doors of the large school as people stared and a certain blonde was furious.

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34 / M / Florida
Posted 2/6/08 , edited 2/7/08
Mmm I like it, watch your run on sentences~
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Posted 2/9/08 , edited 2/10/08
I got a little confused with all the mentioning of the names sometimes.
I like the ending, very funny ^^
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Posted 2/13/08 , edited 2/13/08
A SasuSaku lol.

I don't really understand the part why Sakura said "she couldn't die not now" for no reason. Maybe you should explain more so that'd help in understanding why she fainted as well.

Good job on the whole =D
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